Friday Flash (1)

I tend to stay away from short stories or flash fiction, but here is something that I thought was going to form a complete book, but which, I think, works better as a short story. (Though, who knows, maybe in the future…)

Its timing may be a little off, given some recent events in the UK, but as it’s not based on them, nor inspired by them, I make no apologies. Any similarities to any person are entirely coincidental.

So, without further ado:

A Very Ordinary Killer

The trouble with most killers is that they want to get caught. They’d never admit it, but it’s their vanity which leads to their capture. That desire for infamy, to be acknowledged, to see their crimes featured on TV all linked together, perhaps even to acquire a snappy nickname such as The Romney Ripper or The Cambridge Cannibal, all these things are the weaknesses of your common serial killer. On top of those failures, most serial killers stick to the same tried and trusted methods of finishing with their victims – their modus operandi – and their victims often fall into the same categories, be that just by gender or by some other selection criteria – prostitutes seem to have been the most fashionable victims recently.

Some killers even take delight in leaving clues to their existence, little taunts to the examining officers, perhaps obvious enough for the casual plod to pick up, or more subtle, the sort of thing that’s only going to be detected by the forensic team after detailed examination of the scene. Some even revisit the scene of the crime – perhaps while the investigation is in its earliest stages, when the place is crawling with police – getting some kind of thrill by being so close to those who are doing their best to catch them.

Finally, it has to be said, most serial killers are psychopaths. That might be stating the obvious, but it’s an important fact.

Because none of the above apply to me.

I kill because I enjoy it. And I’ll never get caught because I don’t let my vanity get in the way: I don’t leave clues that taunt the police; I don’t have a modus operandi; I don’t discriminate when selecting my prey (male, female, young, old: they’re all the same to me); I never return to the scene of a crime and there’s never anything to link me to it in the first place.

And, of course, I’m not a psychopath.

I’m just an ordinary guy with a slightly unusual hobby. It’s not really that far removed from those who enjoy fishing, or fox-hunting, or pheasant shooting, or like to conceal themselves in hides in the woods waiting for an unsuspecting deer to wander into their sights. Sure, some of those are frowned upon by certain members of society, the goody-goodies who refuse to allow anyone to indulge in a sport that doesn’t fit their narrow criteria of acceptable. Those who enjoy hunting often claim that they are performing a service, keeping populations down, taking out the weakest of any pack, subscribing to Darwin’s theory of Natural Selection: if that fish was stupid enough to take the maggot off my hook then it doesn’t deserve to live. I could claim the same thing, I suppose, but then that would sound like I’m trying to justify my actions, and that might lead you to think that I’m a psychopath after all, because surely only a psychopath would attempt to put murder in the same league as fishing. So I won’t. I won’t attempt to justify myself to you, because I don’t have to. I’ve already told you: I kill because I enjoy it. No further justification necessary. Case closed.

Besides, who among us can claim to have no so-called vices? We all have skeletons in our closet, sneaky little thrills that we enjoy when we think nobody is looking: the wife who hides chocolate out of sight of the children and her husband; the husband with his pornography addiction; the man with a penchant for prostitutes; the vegetarian who can’t get enough bacon. Small, perhaps, but secret thrills nonetheless, things that they’d be ashamed to admit, that they are terrified of having exposed because of what others will think of them. And why? Why should the opinion of anybody else matter? So you like bacon? Go ahead and eat it! You like porn? Go, get yourself off. It’s nobody’s business but your own.

I just happen to like killing people. It’s my thing, my dirty little secret. I like the moment where they take their last breath and I see the light go out in their eyes – assuming I get to see it, because that depends on what method I use. I like the thrill of the hunt, stalking my prey – but only when I plan it like that, because other times I just love choosing a victim at random, someone who just happens to be in the wrong place at the wrong time (for them, that is – right place, right time for me). I like the blood, when I spill it; I like the feel of the knife on flesh, or the sound of the gunshot, or the silence as they slip away, starved of oxygen, with the rope tight around their neck.

There’s so much to enjoy, really, I’m quite amazed it’s never really taken off as an acceptable past-time. There are so many different personalities out there: you get those who resign themselves to their fate and die with dignity (I’m very fair like that, if that’s how they are then I’ll accept it and finish them off quickly and cleanly); then you get those who will plead and beg and offer you anything, absolutely anything, if you’ll let them go. It’s shocking what depths they’ll plumb in their desperate attempts to survive. The most surprising are those that seemed, on the surface, to be so normal, so straight-laced, so respectable. The things they offer would certainly not be repeatable in front of your grandmother. Money and possessions are the favourites, but a surprising number will offer sexual favours – and that goes for the men as well as the women. And, of course, every single one will promise faithfully that they’ll keep the secret, they’ll never reveal my crime to anybody, will never speak to the police, will forget it every happened and carry on with their lives as before. Utter rubbish, of course, but it’s moot anyway: I never let anybody go. Never. Once I have them, their fate is sealed, they are as good as dead.

The only variables are how and when. There is no if.

Not that I’m averse to taking up their offers. I’ve amassed a good few quid over the years, mainly in small sums as anything too big would arouse suspicion. I’ve been offered houses and cars too, but I never take those for the same reason. And as for the sexual favours? Yeah, I’ve taken a few of those too, mainly from the women though there have been a couple of men. You have to be careful, though: always use a condom, can’t afford to leave any evidence behind; never take oral sex – though that’s a very common offer, but is fraught with danger, an open-invitation for them to inflict serious damage, probably give them time to escape too. There have been plenty who I’m pretty sure would have gone through with it, perhaps even enjoyed it, and I know I would have too, but it’s too risky. So, straight-forward sex, or maybe a bit of hand relief, is all I allow. Sometimes they even seem to enjoy it, too; maybe they think there’s a better chance of being spared if they do. I don’t make unreasonable demands – they don’t have to look at me, don’t have to try to enjoy it, don’t have to kiss me – but if they offer it, I’ll probably take it; I am a man, after all. Don’t try to tell me you wouldn’t, if you were in the same position.

So, I suppose you’re wondering how I got into it? When did I start killing, why, how, where? Those are the questions I’m going to answer. I’m going to let you get inside my head, to see what I see and feel what I feel. Then you’ll understand.

And then you’re going to die.


14 Responses to “Friday Flash (1)”

  1. >Nice last line, with the 2nd person hitting the reader in the face!"The things they offer would certainly not be repeatable in front of your grandmother" :-)"(for them, that is – right place, right time for me)" – I think you could leave off the "right place, right time for me" as it's implied.Welcome to #fridayflash!

  2. >It began with a very good first sentence that intrigued, and the rest of the story was quite captivating. This killer so carefully and dispassionately explained his dirty little secret that I almost nodded and said, "Why, sure, that's reasonable."May I point out a small typo? 7th paragraph, 4th line should read "deer".Last sentence put a chilling end to this very good story. Welcome to #fridayflash!

  3. >Mazzz – thank you! I did wonder about the "for me" part. I'll leave it in for the moment, but we'll see if anyone else picks up on it.Marisa – You made me smile with your comment about how reasonable it is 🙂 (Typo corrected – thanks!)

  4. >Chilling narrative, very well written. I especially enjoyed the last line.Welcome to #FridayFlash!

  5. >If I disbelieve every claim he makes about himself, will he kill me?

  6. >JohnI'm sure he'd say he doesn't care what you think – though whether or not he actually does is another matter. Regardless, though, he'd still kill you!

  7. >The point about Darwinism is there may be a bigger, more proficient serial killer than even he and he may come looking for him to wrest the Crown back off him. I once wrote a story about a "Grand Tour" of a killing in each of the major European cities and then taking it across the pond for a genuine World Series. So I know where this guy's coming from and I love it!He's not a psycho but equates a woman's secret choccie habit with the same drive as killing people, yup that's spot on.marc nash

  8. >This started off as very intriguing and you kept my interest throughout the rest of the story. I like the fact that you took on a main character who has a point of veiw not many other authors write about. One typo I did see what the third to last line, if you don't mind me pointing it out: "Those are the questions are going to answer."

  9. >Thanks all. Typo corrected (can't imagine how that one slipped past…)MB

  10. >Absolutely wonderful. You should write more.

  11. >If I ever meet you, I'll run away. You are scary.


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